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Hi my name Daniel Matt and well from what you can see from the subject title.
I am developing a MMORPG which involes a camel(you) which goes around the desert with other camels(friends or other online people) and do quests buy a house work as a comedian or as a scientist.
Story:You start off my waking up in the middle of a desert and Stevie the spiky cactus calls you on your Iphone. He then explains where you are and you learn to controls. He then tells you to find his friend Palo the smelly Japanese Cactus, you find him and see him on the floor and he his cut open with water pouring out of him. You then hear "That water was joy". You go behind them and spit on them. You go back to Stevie and tell him the news, he then says well thanks anyway and gives you 100 jellycoins. This is start of your journey and their are more quest to complete.
Jobs:After you have complete a certain quest you unlock a job, one job is being a comedian where you go into Camel Comedy Club and you actually write in the message box your joke and admins vote on your jokes.
This is a sketch of your one of the main charatchers
Combat: As you level up you unlock new moves like Spit, Ninja kick, Bite, Camel sex dance and more.
Yes the game is like others you strike then your enemy strikes. You dont get armour but you unlock new clothes hats and ties.
This game is more a comedy based game.
Please ask what I should add what I can do to make it more funny and better
THANK YOU